Overview

In this performance assessment, students will use grade-level aligned narrative writing techniques, including using a clearly identifiable theme or central message, to write a narrative children’s story about a challenge their school or students in their school are facing. After writing the children’s story, students will read their stories to students in a younger grade and talk with them about the theme or message of the story.  

Specifically, the class will be asked to brainstorm challenges the school or students in the school are facing. Then each student will choose a challenge to write about, plan and draft a narrative revolving around that challenge, and then read that narrative to a younger student. 

This unit would likely fall at the conclusion of a narrative writing unit after students have learned the elements of narrative writing and have practiced writing real or imagined narratives. Prior to using this assessment, students should have had specific instruction in determining the theme or central idea in literary texts and in the elements and process of narrative writing. 

Students can create their final presentation in any appropriate way, including, but not limited to, PowerPoint or Google Slides (or another slideshow tool), Microsoft Word or Google Docs, paper and colored pens/pencils/ markers. Final student work should be saved as an Acrobat PDF for uploading to the virtual scoring software. 

Details

Big Ideas & Competencies

Big Ideas Competencies

A. Reading Literature

Students can read with purpose, understand and analyze evidence in literature to construct meaning in increasingly complex texts.

A2

Students can determine the central message or theme and explain how this was detailed in the story.

C. Writing

Students can effectively communicate purpose to an intended audience through written language, using a variety of media.

C3

Students can use effective techniques, descriptive details, and clear event sequences to write narratives (real or imagined experience).

D. Speaking and Listening

Students can listen effectively, present information appropriately given the situation, and collaborate with peers.

D1

Students can engage effectively in collaborative discussions (one-on-one, groups, teacher-led) with a variety of partners, about grade 4 topics and texts, building on others’ ideas and expressing their own ideas clearly (come to discussions prepared, having read, or studied required material).

NOTE ABOUT ASSESSMENT RUBRICS

Below are analytic teacher rubrics. The column on the left shows the dimension that is being measured in the student’s performance. The levels across the top row indicate the performance level in the dimensions. Occasionally all dimensions and performance levels are exemplified by multiple students in a single recording.

Teacher Rubric

Dimensions Not Yet Meeting Expectations Meeting Expectations Exceeding Expectations

Focus/Organization

  • Creates a situation or sequence of events that lacks a story focus and/or story elements.
  • The events are disconnected or not in a logical order and/or it is unclear who is telling the story or who is involved in the events.
  • Provides a disconnected ending or abruptly ends the writing without a sense of closure. 
  • Introduces character(s), situation, and sequence of events.
  • Organizes the narrative to show an appropriate unfolding of events.
  • Provides a sense of closure that connects the characters, situation, and events. 
  • Vividly introduces character(s), situation, and sequence of events.
  • Organizes the narrative to show a clear event sequence that unfolds naturally and introduces believable character(s) or narrator.
  • Provides a clear and realistic closure that follows from the characters, situation and events. 
No exemplars at this time.

Development

  • Includes unrelated or unnecessary details about the character(s), setting, problem, and/or solution or few details are included.
  • Dialogue is used inappropriately or does not support the story line.
  • Simplistic figurative language and/or vocabulary is used which minimally develops the experiences, events, characters and/or setting.  
  • Includes details about the character(s) and/or narrator, setting, problem, and solution.
  • Uses dialogue to show characters’ responses to events or other characters.
  • Uses figurative language or nuanced vocabulary to develop experiences and events, characters, and setting. 
No exemplars at this time.
  • Includes creative and colorful details about the character(s) and/or narrator, setting, problem, and solution.
  • Uses dialogue to show characters’ thoughts and emotions about events and/or other characters.
  • Uses figurative language, word nuances, and shades of meaning to develop experiences and events, characters, and setting. 

Style/Conventions

  • Uses basic temporal words or no linking words to connect the situation or sequence of events.
  • Uses inconsistent capitalization and/or spelling patterns.
  • Uses ineffective sentence structures, and errors may interfere with meaning and/or readability. 
  • Uses linking words and phrases to connect the opinion and reasons.
  • Uses grade-appropriate conventions; errors are minor and do not interfere with meaning and readability.
  • Use correct and varied sentence structures. 
  • Uses sophisticated temporal words and phrases (e.g., a little later, after that) to manage the situation or sequence of events.
  • Uses advanced conventions to enhance meaning and readability.
  • Uses advanced and varied sentence structures. 
No exemplars at this time.

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