Overview

In this performance assessment, students will apply their knowledge of researching, argumentative writing, and persuasive techniques by writing a “This I Believe” essay, like essays found at: thisibelieve.org. 

Students will choose the issue of their choice (e.g., voting age, teen social media use, cell phone use in school, paying college athletes), research it, and write an argumentative essay defending their stance on that issue.  

This assessment can be completed using Google Docs or Microsoft Word. The final product may be emailed to the teacher directly or shared through a school’s learning management system. 

This assessment can be used any time during the school year when students are studying argumentative and persuasive writing techniques. Students should have knowledge of argumentative vocabulary and rhetoric before writing this essay. They should also know how to structure an argument (claim, evidence, counterclaim, and conclusion). 

Details

Big Ideas & Competencies

Big Ideas Competencies

C. Writing

Students can read with purpose, understand and analyze information and evidence to construct meaning in increasingly complex texts.

C2

Students can write arguments to support multiple claims using logical reasoning, relevant evidence, and counter arguments that demonstrate understanding of the complexity of an issue.

E. Research and Inquiry

Students can engage in research and inquiry to investigate topics, evaluate and analyze the validity of sources, and synthesize information to communicate findings.

E1

Students can conduct research by effectively gathering information from credible sources.

NOTE ABOUT ASSESSMENT RUBRICS

Below are analytic teacher rubrics. The column on the left shows the dimension that is being measured in the student’s performance. The levels across the top row indicate the performance level in the dimensions. Occasionally all dimensions and performance levels are exemplified by multiple students in a single recording.

Teacher Rubric

Dimensions Not Yet Meeting Expectations Meeting Expectations Exceeding Expectations

Research and Evidence

  • The essay features little evidence to both support the claim and the counterclaim.
  • The works cited page and in-text citations show numerous formatting errors.
No exemplars at this time.
  • The essay features sufficient evidence to both support the claim and the counterclaim.
  • The works cited page and in-text citations show few formatting errors.
No exemplars at this time.
  • The essay features an abundant amount of evidence to both support the claim and the counterclaim.
  • The works cited page and in-text citations show no formatting errors.
No exemplars at this time.

Argumentative Structure and Persuasive Techniques

  • The essay lacks organization and structure as an argumentative piece (introduction, thesis, supporting evidence, counterclaim, and conclusion) and rarely shows any persuasive techniques.
No exemplars at this time.
  • The essay is structured as an argumentative piece (featuring an introduction, thesis, supporting evidence, counterclaim, and conclusion) and correctly uses some persuasive techniques.
No exemplars at this time.
  • The essay is clearly organized as an argumentative piece (featuring an introduction, thesis, supporting evidence, counterclaim, and conclusion) and correctly uses a variety of persuasive techniques.
No exemplars at this time.

Spelling and Grammar Usage

  • Uses inconsistent grammar and conventions which detract from the quality of the essay.
  • Uses ineffective sentence structures creating a strained or inappropriate style and tone, which may interfere with meaning and readability.
No exemplars at this time.
  • Demonstrate grade-level appropriate conventions; errors are minor and do not interfere with meaning and readability.
  • Uses correct and varied sentence structures.
No exemplars at this time.
  • The essay demonstrates creativity and flexibility when using conventions (i.e., grammar, punctuation, capitalization, spelling) to enhance meaning and readability.
  • Uses sophisticated and varied sentence structures.
No exemplars at this time.

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